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josiefan
New Member
since 2002-10-11
Posts 5
CA, US (English though)

0 posted 2002-10-11 07:13 PM


Hi everyone, this is my first poem posted here, so be gentle

The Darkness Binds

Inside my head they mumble
Mutter
Scream.
Inside my mind they struggle against the chains
That bind them.
Stronger than I am
Kept under control
Only by the strength of love.
But the darkness takes over
And down, down I drop
And dangle from the rope she tied round me.
Hand over hand
Over hand
Over hand
Chapped and raw and bleeding I climb
Striking the rocks
Slipping back down.
Far above me I hear a sound.
It’s you
You’re begging me to come back.
The pain I feel they cause you
Turns into brute strength
With an almighty lunge I dive upwards.
Grasp onto the edge
Hang there for a while
The dark men retreat just a step.
I dangle and pull and grimace and growl
And pull myself all the way out.
Then down comes a feather
Black from the sky
It takes just that…and I fall again.

© Copyright 2002 Angie Hulme - All Rights Reserved
Amaranthine
Member
since 2002-10-06
Posts 61
ON Canada
1 posted 2002-10-12 03:11 AM


The Black Feather

What a topic You address!!!
no straw on a camels back this,
no delicacy about this broken spine!

curse you and crush you for remindinig me of this... bastard

nice poem

Succubus
Member
since 2002-09-30
Posts 82
Canada, Ontario
2 posted 2002-10-12 12:06 PM


I truly enjoyed reading you... I hope to read a lot more...
Kisses,
Succubus

Better to have 10% of something than a 100% of nothing.

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