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LadyPeach1
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since 2001-06-04
Posts 282


0 posted 2002-10-10 10:56 PM


You know I love you,
And you know I want to be with you,
But you keep on pushing me aside,
I can no longer keep being bottled up,
And keeping all these emotions inside,
I can't stand just being friends,
I know thats asking for alot,
But your my best friend and the one I love,
And yet you act like you want to be with me, but your not?
Try to unconfuse me,
Cause I am not understanding,
Why we can't make a love,
That is long and everlasting,
I know I'm young to be in love,
But with you there is no other way to say,
Because your so perfect, and I like you alot,
And if you had any flaws, I'd still like you anyway,
Try to get me to stop liking you,
Cause believe me I have already tried,
I think about you constantly,
Sometimes so much, I think I could have died,
Please help me to comprehend,
If you want to be with me or not,
Cause I'm confused, and I don't want to get hurt,
Cause I really love you alot.

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eor
Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
1 posted 2002-10-11 05:03 AM


stuck between a rock and a hard place i see, been there plenty of times but usually i am the one wanting, nice write...eor
Amaranthine
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since 2002-10-06
Posts 61
ON Canada
2 posted 2002-10-11 12:57 PM


No matter how it hurts, love makes us richer in a sense... and believe me, this is the prime victim of Unrequited Love speaking!  I like the plain and direct language you use.
LadyPeach1
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since 2001-06-04
Posts 282

3 posted 2002-10-12 12:48 PM


Thanks for the replies from you both, you both spoke words of truth.  I just felt like writing this cause I feel this way right now about someone I am really diggin'.  thanks.
LP1

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