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0 posted 2002-10-09 05:30 PM



Welcome To My Soul
Come in, sit and mull.
Kick back and rest the bones,
hear with me the world's moans.

Tell me... why are you here?
Out in the back - the keg of beer?
What are you looking to find?
Here, you and I, in my mind.

It's complicated in the maze,
in me passion's ablaze.
If you must, wear a fire suit...
Hopefully I'll set you on - the point moot.

Shelf after shelf of ideas,
ideas, images, and mama mias.
Good 'n evil rest in the beds,
my battle against evil often in my sheds.

Up on the mantle a portrait of Christ.
And now and then a longing for a tryst.
Both ends of the pendulum,
in this, my condiminium.

Eyes toward the future;
for me, at times, it can be a blur.
Over there my control center
in the files memories of a winter.

Love has rested in the den,
like a tiger in a too small pen.
Regret has passed through,
it does though nothing only making blue.

In here anger rarely lurks.
After all, with it, you end up like the jerks.
Day by day, and night by night,
trying to find my way around here by passion's light.

Walk around and please do browse,
Find out about me - see why I choose what I choose.
For me, for you, there is nothing to loose.
Here, in my mind's eye, my soul's house.

Welcome To My Soul
Come in, sit and mull.
Kick back and rest the bones,
hear with me the world's moans.

3 -20- 02

© Copyright 2002 Daniel Redding - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-10-09 06:25 PM


Dude, wow! I can see why you're quite proud of this one! I must say this one is good. Quite good. I'm very very impressed with this one, Daniel. I'm adding it to my library, and printing it out to stick on my wall. Awesome job here

A toque IS a hat! And I have one!

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2 posted 2002-10-09 06:26 PM


*cough* forgot to add it

A toque IS a hat! And I have one!

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3 posted 2002-10-10 05:17 AM


wow, dude, i don't have anything to say but, wow...eor
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4 posted 2002-10-10 02:15 PM


Echoing Eor.....Wow
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5 posted 2002-10-10 07:49 PM


"Eyes toward the future;
for me, at times, it can be a blur.
Over there my control center
in the files memories of a winter."

Sanity is in itself enough to make you insane.

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6 posted 2002-10-10 08:34 PM


Amazing!  I feel as if I've been on a guided tour of you.  I don't even know you yet now I feel as if I do.  I leave to you a question:  Is that such a good thing?  
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7 posted 2002-10-11 10:22 PM


Thank you all.

Sincerely,
Titus

"My imaginary friend thinks you have serious mental problems."

(2002 Copyright)

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