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eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

0 posted 2002-10-07 07:16 PM

So I Take…

So I take this courage
And rip it right out of my chest
And I'll pass it along to anyone
Who has ever needed some
I know it's not that much
But ill do what I can
I know it's not the same
Since he's been gone

So I take your picture
And rip all up into shreds
You're looking at me
Staring at me
Can't get you out of my head
I know it's not your touch
It's just the coldness form the wind
I know it's not the same
Since you've been gone

So I take my passion
And get it all out of my head
You're gleaming at me
Digging at me
I can't believe what you said
You'll never see me
I'll never be free
Forever trapped in my bed
I know it's not the same
Since my minds been gone

So I take this courage
And rip it right out of my chest
And I'll pass it along to anyone
Who has ever needed some
I know it's not that much
But ill do what I can
I know it's not the same
Since I've been gone

...eor

[This message has been edited by eor (10-07-2002 08:16 PM).]

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

1 posted 2002-10-08 11:58 AM

A melody
and a song.

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

2 posted 2002-10-08 02:29 PM

yeah it actually is a song i wrote, i wanted reactions to it and i don't think its going over to well, so mabye one for the scrap books?...eor

Succubus
Member

since 2002-09-30

Posts 82
Canada, Ontario

3 posted 2002-10-09 11:11 AM

This one is not for the scrap book. I got a great sence of generosity from the main character in the song, it kinda made me feel good. He's in pain, and yet still willing to share his courage...
Very genuine of him
loved it
Succubus

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

4 posted 2002-10-09 12:52 PM

I'll take some.

Very nice. Enjoyed.

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

5 posted 2002-10-10 05:05 AM

thank you guys...eor

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

6 posted 2002-10-10 03:23 PM

and now I find myself
putting music to it
interesting
that every one who reads
this
would have their own
way of
hearing it

very nice E

brian

Amaranthine
Member

since 2002-10-06

Posts 61
ON Canada

7 posted 2002-10-10 08:13 PM

I liked this.

It seemed like a song, yes, but also like a spell. It seems to resonate in some indefinable manner with the apparently naked purpose of its words. Well done.

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

8 posted 2002-10-11 04:48 AM

thanks for your comments, and brian, if you don't mind, what kind of music did your hear,or melody...eor

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