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Succubus
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since 2002-09-30
Posts 82
Canada, Ontario

0 posted 2002-10-06 03:18 PM


Oh Mother, Oh Doctor, Oh God

Oh
Oh Mother, Mother
Will you cure my Stutter?
Oh Mother, Mother
Will you cure my Hepatitis?
Oh Mother, Mother
Will you cure my Diabetis?
Oh Mother, Mother
Will you cure my Asthma?
Oh Mother, Mother
Will you cure my Cancer?
Oh Mother, Mother
Will you cure my Aids?


Oh Doctor, Doctor
Will you cure my Stutter?
Oh Doctor, Doctor
Will you cure my Hepatitis?
Oh Doctor, Doctor
Will you cure my Diabetis?
Oh Doctor, Doctor
Will you cure my Asthma?
Oh Doctor, Doctor
Will you cure my Cancer?
Oh Doctor, Doctor
Will you cure my Aids?

Oh God, God
Will you cure my Stutter?
Oh God, God
Will you cure my Hepatitis?
Oh God, God
Will you cure my Diabetis?
Oh God, God
Will you cure my Asthma?
Oh God, God
Will you cure my Cancer?
Oh God, God
Will you cure my Aids?

20 Years Later, in his/her death bed...

Oh Mother, Mother
Will you get Daddy for me?
Oh Doctor, Doctor
Will you get me a Coroner?
Oh God, God
Will you get me Satan?


© Copyright 2002 Andy Salvador - All Rights Reserved
Amaranthine
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since 2002-10-06
Posts 61
ON Canada
1 posted 2002-10-06 03:48 PM


Tantalizingly twisted!  Funny how death makes traitors of us all.
WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
2 posted 2002-10-06 04:27 PM


Just covering all the bases?
D edgar Grey
Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 174
Hell...(aka Wisconsin)
3 posted 2002-10-06 04:36 PM


heh heh heh...
I liked this bit. At first I thought it was going to be rather see-through and predictable (okay, I'm slightly redundant with my words); but the ending really through me off! Very nice piece!!!

"Am assured,receptive,responsive women of substance. My sense of self comes not from other people but from myself? That can't be right." Bridget Jones

bsquirrel
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4 posted 2002-10-07 12:13 PM


Intelligence, wit,
and a bit of self-
loathing.

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