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Thoughts Anew |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon 
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Can you come with pad and pen to bring me back "remember when"? Back to the time of innocence can you come, must I insist? Bring me words of soft embrace of lovers hands that slowly trace. Bring me this and solace too. Must I scream and plead of you. Paint for me a picture show of laughter and a hug, you know. I'm put upon with drops of pain I'm dying in this acid rain. Can you use your words of power return to life defiled flower, have you the skill to please undo? Wow me now, write thoughts anew. WhiteRose "The first rule of poetry, write what you know." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Imploring to a thoughtless lover, or a cranky muse? (or both?) Loved this, Anne. |
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D edgar Grey Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 174Hell...(aka Wisconsin) |
I liked the imagery this piece created for me...sad and angry; yet happy and mournful. Definitely enjoyed the signature as well! "Am assured,receptive,responsive women of substance. My sense of self comes not from other people but from myself? That can't be right." Bridget Jones |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
No begging aloud allowed... Well done though!  |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Love this idea and your words even more woman!! thought anew...lovely line!!! I've lit many a'candle for this myself!!!') Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Succubus Member
since 2002-09-30
Posts 82Canada, Ontario |
Beautifully done. Love your stuff and always look forward to more... |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Thank you all for your comments. They are greatly appreciated.  |
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