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fractal007
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since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958


0 posted 2002-10-01 09:33 PM


Somebody left a cigarette in the car,
was it you?
Denial of the inevitable
Suspicion of the statement

Does it feel good to suck up in here,
getting high?
Whatever, it always does
Expected to care in an indifferent world

Keep her out of here
She does not know the secret
Block out the background

Let the carcass rot
Be a dying cell in here
Let us decay now

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

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D edgar Grey
Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 174
Hell...(aka Wisconsin)
1 posted 2002-10-01 11:33 PM


Insane...I liked it!!

"Am assured,receptive,responsive women of substance. My sense of self comes not from other people but from myself? That can't be right." Bridget Jones

nolon
Junior Member
since 2002-09-25
Posts 20
Louisiana,Unitedstates
2 posted 2002-10-02 06:01 AM


Comical? lOl where is the skunk ? :P Nice read I liked your choice of words
bsquirrel
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855

3 posted 2002-10-02 03:15 PM


This poem gives secrets,
and leaves others.

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