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People Like Him |
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Succubus Member
since 2002-09-30
Posts 82Canada, Ontario |
People Like Him... Made me afraid to go to school as a child; Laughed and drowned me in their bile; Hurt me when all I wanted were friends; People like him Turned their backs and walked away. People Like Him... Destroyed my sensibility; Made me lose all rationality; took my instability; and corrupted my inner feelings. People Like Him... Made me feel animosity; Took my sovereignty; Made me feel suicidal; People like him should've never made me feel so vile. People Like Him... Never gave me a chance to rejoice; Made me feel remource; Hurt me physically; and never cared for me emotionally. People Like Him... Ignored and criticized me; Never touched me deeply; Always made me feel repugnant; People like him were always abhorrent. People Like Him... Were always fast to say goodbye; Are experts at lies; Could never be monogamous; and always made me feel noxious. People Like Him... Made the world a dangerous place; Made me feel excluded from this race; Never really cared; People like him were never fair. People Like Him... Always spoke with such odious; Always felt so copious; Always Embaressed me; and never acted adequately. People Like Him... Tried their best to insult me with words; Kept their doors always closed; Labelled me an eccentric; People like him were always rough, and never gentle. People Like Him... Made me feel Agony; Took my integrity; Made me feel insecure; and always made me feel sick, this I'm sure. People Like Him... Would gladly watch me die; Said I couldn't put up a fight; Came along and hurt my heart; People like him disrupted my life. People Like Him... Made me feel weak; Always deceived; Enjoyed making me cry; and sad thing is - they never asked themselves "Why." So, In Conclusion... If People Like Him, Have done me so many wrongs, Why do I choose to love him? Why am I not alone??? |
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D edgar Grey Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 174Hell...(aka Wisconsin) |
Grrr...have been down that road before. Not fun... Welcome to piptalk. I guess I really shouldn't be saying "Welcome," as I hardly post, but nevertheless... Anyway, I really liked your style. You brought out some sincere feelings that forced me to remember things I didn't (by the way, that's a compliment!!). Thanks for the kick[edit] read (@#$% guidelines. Won't let one swear!!). "7:08 p.m. Am assured, receptive, responsive women of substance. My sense of self comes not from other people but from...from...myself? That can't be |
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nolon Junior Member
since 2002-09-25
Posts 20Louisiana,Unitedstates |
Very sad poem,Some words i did not know the meaning but you used alot of good words. That was a very powerful poem i liked it much great work. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Welcome indeed. An interesting piece you have here, with a distinctive style... glad you found your way in...  K |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Stay a while, Succubus. Crash a cup of wine. Anyway ... I love how you tie up the complexity of need and love into a spider's web here. Mike |
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Sinful_Steph Junior Member
since 2002-10-03
Posts 35Toronto, Ontario (Canada) |
WOW!!!  I can definitely relate. This poem touched me in a profound way. Thanks for sharing it. See u around.  "Love me little, Love me long, Is the burden of my song" - Robert Herrick |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
i loved the language and the flow of your writing, really jogged the ol memories a bit...eor |
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Succubus Member
since 2002-09-30
Posts 82Canada, Ontario |
Thank u all for your feedback. I appreciate it. Kisses, Succubus Better to have 10% of something than a 100% of nothing. |
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