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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Clouded by the smoke of my dying candle. Every place I turn is a window. The dark curtains choke the light. I'll never heal. Dazed by the times I've spun around you. Every time I close my eyes I'd see life. But when I opened them again..death. I'll never heal. Forgotten by the only one I'd ever loved. Everyone I knew has left me also. I see blood run from my eyes. I'll never heal. If I'd had gone long ago, I wouldn't be immune to this. but this pain is now part of me. As it stirs at my insides, it only builds itself inside my mind, telling me that what I feel's okay. Screaming at me, just to hurt all of you. Whispering to me that I am the only sane one. Telling me That this is all okay... Although my heart my be black, it is not dumb, and knows that this is wrong. (Sorry this is so long.. i just started writing, and couldn't stop. Well.. it's not that long.) Life of a simple man, taught that everyone else is dirty, and thier love is meaningless... oh, i'm so soiled. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Seems to be as long as it needed to be. and as short. You're writing has been wonderful, of late. This one is no exception. I'd like to read you in another 10 years. I have a feeling that you'll be remarkable. ~Ed In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
I do very much agree with you, Ed. Maybe in ten years I will be something, instead of whatever I am now... but thanks for reading. Take care. |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
i agree with wranx 100%. thank u for the dollar today  lol |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Writing is its own form of healing. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
and YOU, miss WILL blow us away when you start writing from the mountainview of LOVE of course I mean of SELF |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Allison- Ed is almost always right... BY THE WAY... Mike, alison, sara, and max were at my house today.. for maybe 3 minutes.. heh. I got a hug.  (lol)Mikey- I know this.. Isn't it why most of us write? Brian- I love the way you make me smile... You've made my day once again. Thank you all for reading. "things have changed you've become a complication |
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