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Torture Of The Night
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Torture Of The Night |
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DewDropRoses Junior Member
since 2002-09-18
Posts 20WV |
Torture Of The Night Cold reddened eyes stare deep into me Searching the darkened depths of my core Its morbid breath penetrates my rising lungs As my hearts frightened rhythm takes an undecided detour. Back into those flaming eyes I stare With determination and strength concealed within my plight As his claws seep deep into my veins and skin All is quiet among the darkened torture of the night. The blood slowly squeezes through the pours of my cells And fills the watery liquid of my bulging red eyes Choking on the blockage buried within my clenched off throat Scuffing out temptations to painfully scream and cry. Visions fading into darkness for lack of flow to the brain A bloodthirsty demon taking life as my fate Making the torture of the night my final drawing breath Lying limp within his grasp, his strength did painfully demonstrate. Copyright 2002 Amy Marie Hess |
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D edgar Grey Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 174Hell...(aka Wisconsin) |
Hello. I liked this piece...I was expecting the person to wake up and realize it was only a dream, but the ending was obviously not that! Still, I enjoyed the surprise. Keep up the good work! "cherry blossoms" |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
bit scary welcome arthur |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Welcome, Amy. This poem was intense. And almost, offhanded in its undoing. Damn. Mike |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Great work....enjoyed. DeaDiAmore |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Welcome luv the poem u'll fit right in here  If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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