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D edgar Grey Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 174Hell...(aka Wisconsin) |
Time enters a void My mind awakens The beat of my heart stops I am in another world This emotional world I now reside in I smile and cry freely here Meeting strangers I¡¦ve always known Colours that have never existed Swirl about the cities Violence tears at one¡¦s soul But happiness is the worst death Small and quiet, this world Large and loud, always and never I live in a world of opposites But they are together without pause Forever happy here, I cry My tears are of sadness and joy I am free in this place For once I can be myself without worry I open my eyes slowly The screeching of my alarm Another world lost for an eternity Only to be visited again ---------------------------------------------------- Yeah, tad bit odd. Any advice??? |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
This dose get one to think. I think it's fine the way it is, good job!  Regret not that which you have done, |
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Zall Member
since 2002-08-25
Posts 214London, England |
Nice work DEG Zall |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
DEG, This is like peeling back the layers of a poison onion. Love it! .m. |
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