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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2002-09-13 12:26 PM

oh I like the water hot
I pour sea salt into the flow
I light candles flickering
and van-van in the froth of foam...

Petals of the rose
for love,
red but dark in velvet crush...
lavender to please the nose
and oil of musk entices touch.

Basil, (though it's overkill)
but I love love enough to spill
like a cloud in cumulous
I simply cannot hold enough.

Sandalwood, appeasing gods,
I'll cleanse away the miles you trod--
I'll lick the drops of me from you
diamond drops on tongue in dew...

Say you love me?
(I am yours...)
Say there was
nothing before...

let me be a blanket spread
and weep my kisses on your head
in hopes each tear is magic seed
planting in you dreams of peace.

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

1 posted 2002-09-13 12:50 PM

you amaze me......

Harmony
Junior Member

since 2002-09-12

Posts 27
GB

2 posted 2002-09-13 05:47 AM

Excellent, what more can i say.

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

3 posted 2002-09-13 11:44 AM

I don't want to sound like I'm a brown noser and such but you never cease to amaze moi! I highly enjoy your writing, etc..I am intrigued nonetheless by you!

Kristen

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

anya
Member

since 2002-07-27

Posts 393
London, UK

4 posted 2002-09-13 02:40 PM

what an interesting write, enjoyed this very much,
anya

smitty-j
Member

since 2002-09-13

Posts 72
Florida, USA

5 posted 2002-09-13 02:52 PM

wowzers..I like it! J

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

6 posted 2002-09-13 04:03 PM

Sen,
You list the ingredients,
and then show them less powerful
than your words.

Mikey

fractal007
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

7 posted 2002-09-13 09:05 PM

This poem strikes me as one examining the idea of cleansing one's self of the past[in this case past love] and moving onto something new with a "clean slate." You have done a good job in portraying the speaker's absolute devotion to love despite whatever may have happened to complicate things in the past.

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

[This message has been edited by fractal007 (09-13-2002 09:07 PM).]

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

8 posted 2002-09-13 09:07 PM

ya'll are so good to me...anyone down south see the moon last night? It looked just like a slice of tangerine...just this wicked orange grin dripping sarcasm down on me...sorry, I digress.

Thanks for reading...and Kris? you can kiss me arse all ya like lovie, I'm kinda kinky that way! and I would certainly hopethat there be no evidence on yer nose, either!

Thanks, yer a doll...

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

9 posted 2002-09-13 09:07 PM

I am with brian. You are amazing!

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