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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa 
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flicker flicker flicker flicker flicker flickerflicker flicker flickerflickerflikflickerflikflikflikflik flicker flicker flicker flicker flicker flicker flicker flicker flicker flicker flicker I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles |
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D edgar Grey Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 174Hell...(aka Wisconsin) |
Undecided...but it looks like the middle finger--which I use to much--or else a flame. That, or...? |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
DeG== damn! that's cool I hadn't noticed that flick -- middle finger or flicker flame that's what is cool about poetry because it is, like any art not just the creator's but also it IS the receiver's to interpret as they will a two way street I didn't have those in mind but, thank you for showing me Brian |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
flicker flicker flicker flicker flickerflicker flicker flickerflickerflikflickerflikflikflikflik flicker flicker flicker flicker flicker flicker flicker flicker flicker flicker flicker--- smolder smoke and spark ignite-- serenity a-blaze...  |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
you like calgon, baby mmmmmmmmmmmmm........ |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
There is a line of poetry I like, which goes "Her lips were like lips." To get to the truth. You, brian, hold the flame. .m. |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
This is a rather interesting experimental piece you have here. As I read it I see a candle light flickering in my mind, as it slowly becomes more excited with the movement of the air and then subsides again. But then, that's just me. Good poem in any case. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Damneditbe!!! (I hate it when my lighter goes out too sweetbri!!!) So um...where's that finger headed man???  ~Tanya Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is so COOL This is just so damn cool. I really have no other word for it..cool cool cool... jealous again. some of you people in here just make me jealous. Which is also COOL.  K |
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