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Assassination to Assertion (hi darkers)
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Assassination to Assertion (hi darkers) |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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Disoriented steel crouches and covers its ears from bellowing glass. While falling angels seek refuge in finality, to the sound of shattered picture frames. Hastening hands grip bewildered hearts with heartening faces; Black and gold knights on sunset stallions, charging a dragon perched upon greatness. Threatening the kingdom with eyes of hatred, cause, and faith. We lay crippled, belly exposed. Outstretched arms pleading why, before falling still. Security slain. Peace pillaged. Eyes open, and angry. I'm on my feet, I'm on the floor, I'm good to go All I need is just to hear a song I know [This message has been edited by Kevin (09-12-2002 05:04 AM).] |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Methinks I like..only due to the simple fact that I've got this soft spot for knights,dragons and such..pls humour me I'm not good at this comment thing..dark indeed tho..*goes away now* Kristen If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Kevin, I like yr take on WTC. By all means, always feel free to post more here. Mike |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
A very good examination of conflict. Your poem is brief while expressing much. Good job. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You've mentioned all but the medallion sir... I like your style!!! good to see you in dark!! ~Tanya Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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