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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-09-11 04:41 PM



Today

On this day
I could not make
my body move,
the all-day news
in the background,
mind replaying the events
as seen a year ago.
My life in disarray,
cannot compare
with the losses
of so many...
for that
I am grateful.

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2002 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
bsquirrel
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1 posted 2002-09-11 04:43 PM


Maureen,
Thanks for posting
such a shining gem here.

Yes, our troubles do seem small,
compared.
But, they'll be back again....

Still ... love this hope,
and this gift!

Mikey

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2002-09-11 04:47 PM


Good evening "Mikey". I thought it may be too trite to post in open...it's just a feeling...I only got dressed a few moments ago and it's almost 5 p.m...going to try to go to our State Fair...absorbing all that negativism isn't good for my soul at this time...
I haven't spoken to anyone in two days..and have no voice...that darn cough, you know,
it keeps coming back to haunt me or maybe it's just a sign to tell me I am better off silent. *s

M

Zall
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3 posted 2002-09-12 04:02 AM


I can relate to this,

Great piece,

Zall

bsquirrel
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4 posted 2002-09-12 11:54 AM


Didja have fun at the fair, Maureen?

Me

nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2002-09-12 01:39 PM


I had fun, stuffed myself with all those fair goodies...ran into friends I haven't seen for years...listened to a karoake singer singing the "oldies but goodies" from a radio station and visited the animals...

but couldn't say much....still...and walked off the stress.
thanks Mikey,
hugss
M

bsquirrel
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6 posted 2002-09-12 02:24 PM


I'm glad you had a good time.

Mikey

WhileIWasGone
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7 posted 2002-09-12 03:51 PM


Very nice work....enjoyed very much.

DeaDiAmore

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