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0 posted 2002-09-11 12:39 PM


Their eyes of granite did proclaim
nothing. 'Twas only sand.

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (09-11-2002 01:08 PM).]

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WhiteRose
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1 posted 2002-09-11 01:09 PM


Very profound...I like!
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2 posted 2002-09-11 01:10 PM


Thanks, Anne. I like yr Bob Barker is the void poem more.

Mikey

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3 posted 2002-09-11 01:12 PM


HAHAHAHAHA..yeah, that one was such great fun. I was building to a serious ending and old Bob Barker popped into my mind and I just couldn't resist. Glad you liked
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4 posted 2002-09-11 01:14 PM


Glad you wrote it.
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5 posted 2002-09-12 03:59 AM


Nice one,

Zall

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6 posted 2002-09-12 11:52 AM


Thank you, Zall. Now I realize it should have been 'Twere, not 'Twas. Oh well.

Mikey

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7 posted 2002-09-12 03:30 PM


OH. *slapping my oblivious head*

Now I get IT...

*chuckle*



dunno what it is with me and SAND...sighing at the beautiful brevity that says so much.

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8 posted 2002-09-12 03:39 PM


Beautiful...

H.

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9 posted 2002-09-12 06:00 PM


Heh heh, thanks you two. Not the most subtle thing I've written.

Mikey

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10 posted 2002-09-14 03:47 PM


sad that sand should be so...so?

what's the word??? eh..I'll be back Mikey boy!!! when I catch that word.

~Tanya

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



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11 posted 2002-09-14 04:00 PM


Devina,
Sandy?

.m.

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12 posted 2002-09-14 05:28 PM


So few words, yet it means so much.  Very cool, I liked it a lot.  
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13 posted 2002-09-16 12:42 PM


Thank you, Miah!

Mike

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