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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-09-07 12:14 PM




I could change you

a twist here
a crease erased
a fold changed

just so

but no

betty boop
in paper
suits you

used to
complete
the feng shui

placed
but not played

surreal
not real

a distorted
characature

of a loose
cartoon slut.

WhiteRose


"I can't stay on your life support, there's a shortage in the switch"~~Pink

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (09-07-2002 12:15 PM).]

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A. L. Becker
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since 2002-09-06
Posts 167
San Francisco, California
1 posted 2002-09-07 05:49 PM


dear WhiteRose,
nice images, i'm seeing origami, and the feng shui reference works well with that.
Annika:-

Zall
Member
since 2002-08-25
Posts 214
London, England
2 posted 2002-09-08 06:25 PM


Nice piece,

Zall

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2002-09-09 09:16 AM


Your last line cracked me up! hahahaha....I'm still laughing!

Linda

WhiteRose
Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
4 posted 2002-09-09 10:13 AM


Hi Linda, it was meant to be funny, and I laughed as I wrote it. I'm so glad you enjoyed the little bit of dark humor
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