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Cant stop the tears
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Cant stop the tears |
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MissunderstoodGrrl Junior Member
since 2002-08-24
Posts 27Ontario, Canada |
My eyes always full with tears their never dry i cant stop the tears from comming down tear by tear they run down my cheeks the older i get the more tears that fall day by day i feel sadder and sadder why i do i'll never know for sure so many around who care but they just dont understand me i know their there for me always but what i need them for they just dont understand im sick im falling they try but its not working i just cant stop the tears i whip them all away but they just keep comming back I hear people say all the time "its not right to not believe in god" but they cant see what he has done to me if there is a god then i hate him if there was a god he'd stop all these tears he'd come and set me free make everything ok But there is no god and i still cant stop these tears im drowning here can someone help me please stop the tears hold me near tell me im ok tell me its all going to be fine take away all the things that hurt me i'll listen this time i really will all i need is someone someone to come close to me I'll let you in my life i wont push you away i need someone to come and whip away these tears -:¦:-Hey god i know i'm just a dot in this world |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
sounds like one of my journal enteries..its hard to believe but you do not go unnoticed by God or the ppl who love you.. Kristen If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (09-07-2002 03:33 PM).] |
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A. L. Becker Member
since 2002-09-06
Posts 167San Francisco, California |
dear MissunderstoodGrrl, i once felt that my pain would never stop. when it did i missed the tears. the hardest thing to understand is that God may not want us to understand. somehow, realizing that was a comfort to me. God bless you and thank you for the vivid poetry. Annika. |
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D edgar Grey Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 174Hell...(aka Wisconsin) |
This really sounds like one of my friends, who is suffering from severe depression. No matter what happens, she remains on her own, even with her closest friends. I'm not going to tell you to believe in God, because that's your choice to make. (Personally I am undecided...don't like either side!) I'm also not gonna tell you what you need to do or whatnot, simply because different things work for different people. All I really wanted to say was that I really appreciate that you feel comfortable expressing these very strong emotions to everyone and that I think it was a very powerful piece. I hope that you find someone who will listen without hesitation, and that this person will always be a close friend. I wish you the best of luck... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
*hug* |
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