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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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I feel a rage coming on I feel the notes of my favourite song Blarring through the corridors of time Brandishing each nerve attached to my spine And screaming at the top of each chord Reverberating in my mind But whatever right? Like it matters anymore!? You're gone Like many times before Kind of tired Of reliving your last words Before I walked out that hotel room What a bunch of recycled lies But I really can't help it At times I fall upon my knees In tears and in pain Hating myself For being so obessively naive And for actually almost Allowing myself to get close And to actually almost Letting my guard down I should have listened to my intuition But whatever right!? If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (09-06-2002 02:05 AM).] |
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A. L. Becker Member
since 2002-09-06
Posts 167San Francisco, California |
Ceinwyn, i know the feeling of fatigue from reliving those last words... doesn't stop me from doing it again though. "At times I fall upon my knees" sounds like a cliche, except that i remember distinctly doing just that. and more actually. and similarly, hating myself. bravo. Annie :- |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
You've learned how to bend without breaking. Now, you can go get all embroiled again, cause that's how it works. I think. ~wranx p.s. intuition, while often correct, seldom was a determining factor for me either. In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I feel the pain, anger, and sadness of this piece, Kristen. I hope it helped y'. Mikey |
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