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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2002-09-04 01:52 PM



Between incarnations
The soul does wander,
This life between lives
Gives chance to ponder,
That which we need
To make us whole,
To erase bad deeds
And to help us grow,
To raise awareness
And to clean the slate,
There's much to do
In the spirit state,
Drink deep from The River
To erase past lives,
Or you may find
You've too many wives,
For the past and present
Would thus entertwine,
And your next body
Would be out of its mind!

© Copyright 2002 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
bsquirrel
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1 posted 2002-09-04 02:23 PM


Linda,
I like the reincarnation humor.

Mike

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2002-09-04 03:33 PM


I'm glad you appreciated my reincarnation "ha-ha".

Linda

wranx
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3 posted 2002-09-04 05:52 PM


Drinking deep from your stream of forget, seems terribly appealling.....sometimes.

A good look at what may be, thanks


~wranx

D edgar Grey
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4 posted 2002-09-04 07:12 PM


I liked this one, but I find it rather humourous: most people I know want to know about their past lives if they have any. It's refreshing to see a different perspective! Keep up the good work!
Earth Angel
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5 posted 2002-09-05 12:02 PM


Wranx---a stream of rum, from bottle to mouth, could do a pretty good job of helping one to forget! But then, one would wake up with a heck of a hangover, and to me that is like self-induced flu!   Heehee Thank for the reply.

Linda

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-07-2002 03:43 PM).]

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2002-09-05 12:04 PM


DedgarGrey---Why, thank you!

'Til we meet again (next life?)
Linda

Zall
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7 posted 2002-09-06 07:48 PM


I like this EA

Zall

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8 posted 2002-09-06 07:52 PM


*chuckle*

you've got me here...

and I thought Styx was in Hades? (curious now) is reincarnation an option from there? hmmmm...

loved this, and found it intriguing...

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