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EveGnosis
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since 2002-02-21
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0 posted 2002-09-04 01:43 AM


peace be with me
for i am at war
no universal victor
but victimized by the wind
i offer a treaty of harmony
you say goodbye with a destructive bomb
leaving a mass searching
for pearls in a harbour
of discontent united
three superpowers destroyed
me, myself and i
by your self-prosperous good aim
here's to your "boom" of glory


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brian sites
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1 posted 2002-09-04 01:56 AM


the war!
the BIG one
analogy
of within.
peace
be upon
the inner.
no envy gnosis
all WWright?

bsquirrel
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2 posted 2002-09-04 12:11 PM


EveGnosis,
I wonder where that pearl
will turn up next...

Mike

wranx
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3 posted 2002-09-04 05:41 PM


The considered words above, notwithstanding, Methinks that you are, indeed,  as one with said triumverate.

peace be with you, friend Michael.

~Ed

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".      

~wranx~

Zall
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since 2002-08-25
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London, England
4 posted 2002-09-04 05:47 PM


A thought provoking write michael

Zall

Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09
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5 posted 2002-09-04 08:14 PM


I agree with everyone as well..thought provoking, don't we all feel that at one time in our lives..most then many..touched a nerve..and yes may peace be with you..

Kristen

devina
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Cali
6 posted 2002-09-05 12:06 PM


Oh Michael...

~sigh~

tears.

this boom has echoed and splintered inside my soul sweet man. You know my hugs are your hugs in this great big mess of internet. Take care!

so that peace may us *all*


~Tanya

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



Purity
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since 2001-11-20
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Once Upon, USA
7 posted 2002-09-05 01:30 AM


If ever there were the perfect time...
Let it be boldly spoken.
You inspired a phrase in coins: "a bomb of regret"
Your peace is nigh...and your tribute probably less grand than deserved, but there.
You wiped the war away, and left me...well, backwards looking..."raw" with emotions.
Smile! Victory has been announced.

News_From_Nowhere
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since 2002-06-14
Posts 173
CU, NY
8 posted 2002-09-05 02:03 AM


EG - Your first two lines
Are historic poetry!
I truly liked this one
May-b peace is already with you?
The last few responses were
Off the radar!
(May Peace be with us all)

"So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm

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