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No Peace of Mind
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No Peace of Mind |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light 
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My days are dark and dreary The nights calm not my soul Anxious thoughts keep swirling about As I sink down this black hole The never-ending restlessness Consumes me all the time Engulfing me completely --How I long for peace of mind Each painful life experience Has cracked this thin veneer Bit by bit the pieces fall I soon shall dis... .....................ap.. ............................pear... ........................................... |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
This was great. I loved how you seperated the ending... -Tanya ~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks for dipping your toes in here, Earth Angel. I enjoyed the humbleness of this fall-apart. It's so easy to romanticize things like this, so it seems transcendent -- when really, there's *nothing* inherently romantic in a bloody awful day. I'm glad you brought that view here -- Lord knows this place needs it now and again. Mike |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Yeah I also love its sentiment and the ending too was good.  If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Thank you all for your comments on this poem. I decided to venture forth and post here in Dark Poetry. This is the perfect forum for my "Shadow Self" writing. And Mike, your insightful comments were very much appreciated. Linda |
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