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Dragon Mistress
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since 2002-08-26
Posts 289
Washington, USA.

0 posted 2002-08-29 03:29 PM


Your Storm

Your gray clouds
Have covered my sunny days.
I feel nothing now
But your suffering.

The lightening
Of your anger
Strikes me so.
I feel your confusion.

The cold winds
Of your fear
Sting my back.
If feel your worry.

The bitter rain drops
Of your stress
Hate my face.
I feel your frustration.

The growling thunder
Of your sadness
Startle my soul.
I feel your hurt.

I see it growing
Your gray clouds
Turn to black.
I feel your storm.

-Tanya

( I really didnt like this one too much...I really wasnt going to post it, but something changed my mind *shrugs*)

~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

© Copyright 2002 Tanya Weakley - All Rights Reserved
Zall
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since 2002-08-25
Posts 214
London, England
1 posted 2002-08-30 09:33 AM


Trust your instincts,

Good work DM

Aaron

brian sites
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since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475
usa
2 posted 2002-08-30 12:06 PM


yes
Just Post It
this is an honest write
so it has to be here
startling lines in this
sometimes emotions can be
forces of nature
and must be weathered
remember
post them please
brian

bsquirrel
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3 posted 2002-08-30 12:11 PM


Tanya,
This reminds me of a poem I wrote called Love among the storm.
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Mike

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (08-30-2002 01:23 PM).]

Dragon Mistress
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since 2002-08-26
Posts 289
Washington, USA.
4 posted 2002-08-30 02:34 PM


Thank ya!
Oh and Mike, I read that poem.  Awesome as all of your others are!
-Tanya

~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

wranx
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
5 posted 2002-08-31 12:26 PM


This was better than fine. Sometimes you can read your own work and become inured to it.

I agree, just post it!

~wranx

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".      

~wranx~

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