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angel girl
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since 1999-07-23
Posts 322
within a whisper...

0 posted 2002-08-29 02:45 PM


I really cared about you, about us.
I let go of my heart, let my heart lead me
For once I let my myself love another
Paying no heed to what my mind did see.

I don’t understand why you are doing this
Making me dream of things to come
Leading me on with your false hope
Making me feel like I’ve come undone.

Without a word, you cut me off
You don’t even care about what you’ve done
You left me behind in a shattered dream,
Never knowing what we could have become.

"What makes letting go hard isn't losing what you had, but losing the dream of what could have been."

© Copyright 2002 Liz - All Rights Reserved
Dragon Mistress
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since 2002-08-26
Posts 289
Washington, USA.
1 posted 2002-08-29 02:54 PM


Very nice.  I've felt like this before.  Good piece!
-Tanya

~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

MidnightSon
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since 2002-05-15
Posts 312
between the gutter & the stars
2 posted 2002-08-31 08:35 PM


so many of us get left this way....
but it somehow seems justified when we are the ones writing them off... or maybe my friends are just.. well you know the word.

one day, far from now, you'll wake up and not know how you got there or why the pain is gone.
you may even miss the pain.
good luck, and i hope the writing helps.

it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown

D edgar Grey
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since 2002-08-21
Posts 174
Hell...(aka Wisconsin)
3 posted 2002-08-31 08:49 PM


AHHHH!!! This is exactly how I feel about my best friend right now! Wow. You've really hit the nail on the head with emotions. Hope all is okay...
angel girl
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since 1999-07-23
Posts 322
within a whisper...
4 posted 2002-09-01 11:49 AM


Thanks everyone. Your comments mean a lot to me.
I think things are getting a little better now and that person seems to be coming around.

"What makes letting go hard isn't losing what you had, but losing the dream of what could have been."

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