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Diastonene VII -- The Lord Finds His Lady
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Diastonene VII -- The Lord Finds His Lady |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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from 6. Cathrene Ponders /pip/Forum46/HTML/002455.html 7. The Lord Finds His Lady Love lies distant, like coal bobbing sea. Color in the darkness of pounding, vibrant cold. No! We must die together! Collect her up, now. Collect her up. A coin. I must die with her. Love lies distant, statue angel bride. And now she shall fade, buried upon the coast. At least get the water wet face back to life. Oh please. Must get the water-wet face back to life and breath and thought. Collect her up. Collect her up. Love lies distant, statue of my bride, and now to peace. I must draw up some water. Oh please. Swim out from the dark tide. Losing keys. Casting seeds across the bathroom floor. Carrying her, velvet and bones, to nowhere's white door. Trailing hair, flowing there, obscured in swimming light. Through the glaze, her burning face and water in her eyes. Brushes brow, tastes their ring, promise blood on tongue. Swallows loop -- the ring is gone. Burning like the sun. Leaves her to the water's hold. He must find out who is done. [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (08-28-2002 04:04 PM).] |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
jeezy peezy...great once again! so I've read 5, 6 and now 7(still searching for the first 4). Liked them all! ~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ [This message has been edited by Dragon Mistress (08-28-2002 03:55 PM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I promise you, I've not been ignoring these--I'm just running about like mad lately--and I want to read them in order--I'm sort of anal that way....so, be expecting me---smile. I am saving them for "dessert."  |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
 Glad you're enjoying, Dragon Mistress. Y'know, if you select the option of Topics from last 30 days, you can read Diastonene 1-4, too, which might help this make more sense.(or might not )Mike |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Hi, sen! No worries. Read 'em if and when you have time. It's an interesting experiment/experience for me, trying a longerform work than I usually do. Let's see if I can keep the narrative from collapsing in on itself (it's a struggle for me). And lack of time is the exact reason I ended up erasing ICQ again ... I figure that we (and all my PIPfriends) have plenty of time in e-mail and in PIP, ricocheting off each other. ICQ is a supreme *wait* of time (before someone actually logs in .Mikey,  [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (08-28-2002 03:58 PM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
yanno...I think I may start a discussion thread about icq--it seems to me it distracts from the forum--sort of like pulling someone aside to whisper--besides, it really works the hubby's nerves when I do that (chat). So my apologies to all if I seem distant--and hey, Mike, thanks for being so understanding. (serenity exits, as the dryer "buzzer" just went off--AGAIN.  ) |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
Thank ya Mike! Yay! Now I can find the first 4 and read em! Woo hoo! ~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
No problem, Sen. I not only understand the lure/endure of ICQ, I live it. (until recently, that is  )Thanks for enjoying, Dragon Mistress. I'm glad you're able to follow this strange narrative loop I've got goin' here. Mikey |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
These are still going strong Mikey. Loved every one. ~Ed |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
Velvet and Bones has to be a band name/album name. I have spoken. Continuing yumminess, baby o' mine. I want you to read these all to me when you're done 'em, then see if y' can sing Perfect Drug for me in the same sitting. K? K.i'll be waiting for you |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
desperation love nonononono don't go feverish talking to a grey "what have you done?" day ok #8? |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
wranx, thank you. Lori, does i'? brian, the cure. Mike |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
On to 8. The Lord and Robert Fight /pip/Forum46/HTML/002800.html |
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