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Rebelious
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since 2001-05-27
Posts 57
Kansas, USA

0 posted 2002-08-27 11:10 AM



I’m sick of the hurt.
I’m sick of the pain.
I’m sick of the drama.
I’m going frickin insane.

I found out something helpful though,
It’s how to forget the heartache.
Flood my thoughts with anger,
And finish all the crap I take.

I’m throwing down my shield,
And goin on the offensive.
No more Mr. Nice guy.
No more wussy as Mr. Sensitive.

I’m grabbing the easiest piece of as,
And getting what I need.
No more heartache,
Just a man whose gonna succeed.

Woman always say….
“Oh that’s a typical male.”
But they speak out of ignorance,
And they’ll soon see I’ll never fail.

I know my words are cruel,
And my motives are taboo,
But believe at one time,
I had feelings too.

© Copyright 2002 Dustin Ortiz - All Rights Reserved
Dragon Mistress
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since 2002-08-26
Posts 289
Washington, USA.
1 posted 2002-08-27 12:36 PM


Oh Wow...I like this.  I like this a lot.  Although I must disagree with it.  The whole "No more Mr. Nice Guy". *shrugs* Its a great piece none the less!  Hope to read more from you!!

~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

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