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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2002-08-26 09:32 PM



All you have is tears when it rains,
And people don't see you when in pain,
Next time a black cloud rolls over,
And the world is dark and gray dont forget,
Nobody sees tears in the rain.


If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

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Match
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1 posted 2002-08-27 12:00 PM


When it is dark nobody does see tears in the rain.........Liked this one

I cant see past all the pain and torture that goes on in the places we call,
home.
~Azi

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2 posted 2002-08-27 02:43 AM


So very true...
I enjoyed this much!!

~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

Zall
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3 posted 2002-08-27 04:48 AM


Short and meaningful, and I know the feeling.

Zall
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Moon Dust
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4 posted 2002-08-27 08:08 AM


thank you all

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

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5 posted 2002-08-28 02:48 PM


I like the wry insight here, Maria.

Mike

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6 posted 2002-08-29 07:06 PM


Thank you

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

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7 posted 2002-08-29 07:06 PM


Thank you

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

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8 posted 2002-08-29 07:07 PM


Thank you

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

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