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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. 
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Hate Always there Hovering Hanging In the mind Thinking Knowing In the body Seeing Feeling When you’re frightened It mocks It laughs When you’re happy It ruins It depresses When you’re angry It pushes It shoves In the eyes Staring Uncaring In the hands Gripping Hurting Always there Hanging Hovering ~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I liked this much dragon miss, Great construct and concise in content. Good work. ~wranx In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
hey I like it  If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Dragon Mistress, I like how you wrap this up in its own tight knot, with one fray showing. Mike |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
Thank you all! Means a bunch to me when my pieces are liked... ~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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