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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2002-08-26 11:59 AM



I didn't know
the cool
of attitude

would become
the cold
of love

frigid enough
to freeze me
in pause

unable to
find again
the soft warmth

in true love
of heart.

WhiteRose


[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (08-26-2002 12:01 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
Dragon Mistress
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1 posted 2002-08-26 04:25 PM


This is nice.  I enjoyed reading it!

wranx
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Moved from a shack to a barn
2 posted 2002-08-26 06:16 PM


Brrr, Anne, this was a chilly one. Toss another log on that fire.

~wranx

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".      

~wranx~

Moon Dust
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3 posted 2002-08-26 07:42 PM


can we roast chestnuts on that fire as well wranx.
oooh I agree with him though it is cold

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

brian sites
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since 2002-06-25
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4 posted 2002-08-27 08:15 PM


I hope this isn't true, Anne
a little
powerhouse
of
poetry
this
brian

WhiteRose
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5 posted 2002-08-28 12:18 PM


Brian:

I have found in life that even "love" can be relative. To the place, to the time, to the relationship. I search for it not, nor will I ever again, it has too many variables. Only in my poetry is "love" just that and nothing more.

Thank you for the responses everyone.

I said so softly
twas lost amid.
A whisper gone
thought now dim.

bsquirrel
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6 posted 2002-08-28 02:35 PM


Both a wince and a sigh.

Mike

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