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Dark Poetry #3

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Zall
Member

since 2002-08-25

Posts 214
London, England

0 posted 2002-08-26 04:04 AM

Grey
Sky and stone
Perpetual Day
Of Neon haze
Rain
The cleansing never ends
Streets stained with misery
Gargoyles leer
Yet the rain continues

Dragon Mistress
Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 289
Washington, USA.

1 posted 2002-08-26 04:56 AM

This is great stuff. Deep...lot of feeling. I can almost see a picture of these gargoyles leering as it pours. Great stuff

~*Dragon Mistress*~

Zall
Member

since 2002-08-25

Posts 214
London, England

2 posted 2002-08-26 07:28 AM

Thanks, glad you liked it

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

3 posted 2002-08-26 08:24 AM

like the simple, bold images
photographs
puts the reader *there*
looking forward to more
good job
brian

I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

4 posted 2002-08-26 06:19 PM

Nice write, good (dark) moody images, here.

~wranx

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".

~wranx~

bsquirrel

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since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

5 posted 2002-08-27 03:09 PM

Makes me think of those gargoyles and rain in Tim Burton's Batman. That's a good thing!

Zall
Member

since 2002-08-25

Posts 214
London, England

6 posted 2002-08-27 07:16 PM

Thank you all for your praise, it means a lot

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