navwin » Archives » Dark Poetry #3 » deadly
Dark Poetry #3
Post A Reply Post New Topic deadly Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
~*ToUrNiQuET*~
New Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 3


0 posted 2002-08-25 11:52 PM


I pulled you over like a skeleton cage
content to suffer within your cavities
skin pulled thin and tight with rage
fits perfectly into my tragedies
im not wasted
im not right
im not perfect
or alive tonight..
i pulled you close and kissed you numbly
wishing you could be worthwhile
but words rotted to wisdom,slowly
unhooked my metal smile
im not ready
im not here
im equipped
to dissappear...

then you dress me neatly in excuses
making it so clear...

that im just tredding water
and i'm almost falling in
im not here, i'm just waiting
for my seventh deadly sin.



© Copyright 2002 ~*ToUrNiQuET*~ - All Rights Reserved
Match
Member
since 2002-07-01
Posts 286
Canada Edmonton
1 posted 2002-08-26 01:57 AM


Liked very much
Dragon Mistress
Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289
Washington, USA.
2 posted 2002-08-26 04:32 PM


I enjoyed this very much so!

~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

bsquirrel
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855

3 posted 2002-08-29 12:44 PM


A cadaver trying to walk on water?
Meat hooks and smiles?
Yikes!

Mike

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Dark Poetry #3 » deadly

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary