Untold stories of a young grrls life

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MissunderstoodGrrl
Junior Member

since 2002-08-24

Posts 27
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2002-08-25 09:58 AM

Untold stories of a young grrls life:
Sitting here tonight i finally see
there's nothing left here for me
the devils knockin at my door
i have been robbed of everything and everyone that mattered to me
withought the people who once loved and cared about me
I am nothing
people look at me and see a messed up grrl who has lost her way
she fears the thought of living another day in this life full of hate
Tomorrow will never come
their will never be another cold dark rainy day that i will have to site through
there will never be sunny days
but who needs sun to brighten a life full of darkness
shattered from the pain
taken away with such hurt
i dont think anyone should be sad for me
if they ever stoped and looked
there was never a day that there was a smile on this face
never a day i felt like i was cared about
and truthfully i never was
friends couldnt look deeper inside to see the real me that was taken away
instead they looked at the demain that stole my life away
they judged and didnt think how much they would hurt me
what they cant see is that deep inside that little grrl i once was
is always there, watching whats happening around her
seeing friends leave her all alone
seeing them walk away, talk bad about her
they did nothing but bring the end closer
so in some ways i should thank them
thank them for bringing my days of pain and torcher to an end
im not gonna say goodbye
they dont deserve that
hell they probably wont even notice im gone
i will say goodbye to the few who cared
goodbye to you all
im opening that door
and walking away from here

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2002-08-25 10:40 AM

hey tiffany...sad write, so full of angst--and funny thing about phases of life, sometimes we don't realize that unhappiness is a starting block for us to reach for MORE--and something more suited to the integrity of being ourselves. smiling, now excuse me, while I go type that 500 times...

may you find yourself out there!

MissunderstoodGrrl
Junior Member

since 2002-08-24

Posts 27
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2002-08-25 10:53 AM

thank you so much for the nice things you said..it means alot
**Tiffany**

-:¦:-Hey god i know i'm just a dot in this world
Have you forgot about me?-:¦:-

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

3 posted 2002-08-25 12:55 PM

Tiffany Grrl,
You express the "alone" in which you now dwell, quite well.
Your offering, is a nice stream of conscience kind of work.

I see that you are not encouraging "criticism", but would like to say, that misspellings have detracted from your otherwise very good poem. Sorry if I offended.

~wranx

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".

~wranx~

MissunderstoodGrrl
Junior Member

since 2002-08-24

Posts 27
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2002-08-25 05:08 PM

if your talking about how i spell girl..then i mean to spell it that way..and also knockin...alot of the mistakes are on purpose..and no you didnt offend me

-:¦:-Hey god i know i'm just a dot in this world
Have you forgot about me?-:¦:-

Zall
Member

since 2002-08-25

Posts 214
London, England

5 posted 2002-08-25 06:25 PM

I just joined the forum five mins ago, and read your work. So for what its worth someone new knows you exist and someone new thinks the world is better off for it.

Dragon Mistress
Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 289
Washington, USA.