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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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Her words are thunder to my broken heart. Lightning defines every shadow sharply. Shadow chains, not the metal cold. Like rain. Her words are hailing ice bones of regret. Breaking windows with white stones she throws. Such frail letters fall apart on impact. Like snow. Her words are violent winds within the trees. Ripping leaves to tatters of dead fingers. How will they catch the sun, she needs it so? Like fire. Her words wander down the moonless road. A distant sign that never travels with her. Always aching eyes to read that warning. Go home. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Shadow chains, not the metal cold. Like rain. yep....she's liquid electricity...fluid and full of valued shock. Hold on to her, lovie. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I'm not even sure who this is about, who this "her" is. I'm just tired from my trip, I guess. And on a different note, I saw Spider-man on the plane ride to Fla., and the ending just frustrated the living hell out of me. It felt like such a cop-out. Grrr!  I'm so complicated, huh? But not in the Avril Lavigne tie-wearing way.Wow, I'm all over the place this morning. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Welcome back, squirrel dude! This seems to be a lonely little ditty. "Her words wander down the moonless road. A distant sign that never travels with her. Always aching eyes to read that warning. Go home." Sleep, says he. ~wranx In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
There ain't nothin' wrong with bein' complicated in the Avril tie-wearin' way! Y' can borrow mine, straight from Scotland, with the bitchy pin on it. *kiss* I almost always get the impression you're talking to/about me when you use the word 'she', baby. I understand I'm a bit biased, but still, even Serenity got a hint of it. Besides, you can't write a poem mentioning hail (even if you didn't come outright and say that word ) AFTER I've written a God of Hailstones themed poem and expect me not to wonder where yr words were comin' from.I love you. And yr poetry. Very much so. i'll be waiting for you |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I have this problem of [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (08-19-2002 02:35 PM).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
spilling my guts in [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (08-19-2002 02:35 PM).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
public forums. *ahem* Thanks, wranx and Lori! [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (08-19-2002 02:36 PM).] |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
You forgot Serenity. Oh weirdly spacing one. If you were busy deleting stuff you put, you'd better go back and fix that... Y'know you're not allowed to start saying something then not follow through. So there. i'll be waiting for you |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Oh, I was most DEFINITELY busy deleting stuff I put.  And I thought I did thank, Sen. Oops! If I didn't, sorry Sen! Can I have an omelette? Mikey |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
Well, if you're not going to tell the rest of the world, you're at least going to write it in an email to me... This very instant. And ask my forgiveness for making me wait.  Hmm, I think Kim might be creeping into my mood. Down, grrl, it's Bronwen's turn to have a romp in my way-too-twisted mind. i'll be waiting for you |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Eh, I'm just a confused little squirrel right now. I like wranx's suggestion -- sleep. Or sleep at work, which isn't nearly as desirable... |
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