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brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

0 posted 2002-08-18 11:10 PM

red cascades
the blue pages
I grab the purple
thunderhead rages
and make
righteous rue
in royal hue

reflex elbow bends
irony to lip
a hypocrite sip
hits the cloud
softening to grey
ponder-chair
dismay
at array of
injustices
we choose from

what side is defaced
does not matter
it all blocks out the sun

what I have to offer
I open
and pour gold on the
purple passion

I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2002-08-18 11:16 PM

and you prove your artistry time and again, even to the short-sighted me...

(I checked my attitude at the door t'nite!

)

but? I do confess, I love the breaks here, and it does have impact--but I'm not gonna beat a dead horse--wouldn't even beat a live one--I just tend to be a bit Obsessive/compulsive...sigh sigh and tsk to me and bravo to YOU.

misery_made_beautiful
Junior Member

since 2002-08-10

Posts 36

2 posted 2002-08-18 11:25 PM

Boy, you got me on this one. Would this have anything to do with writing?

If not, it's not you, it's me...

Like the imagery and flow.

The big-bad-bri-ster does it again!

P.S. I wonder how Jac*ass is doing

Later
P.S. I wonder how Jac*ass is doing

Later

"Aging keeps life interesting"

[This message has been edited by misery_made_beautiful (08-18-2002 11:26 PM).]

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

3 posted 2002-08-18 11:50 PM

thanks, Karen
and relax

The "mess" from the other night
did learn me a little.
Oh, and, your attitude is part of your charm
and is missed by this dude anyways

c'mere and gimme a hug

mis- thanks, dude
no it's not writing
but, something else that's bugging
and as for the little fella
I don't want to think about it anymore
poor little creature

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

4 posted 2002-08-19 11:59 AM

Yep, this place can sure make one angry ... but you still feel "belonged."

If that makes sense.

Mike

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

5 posted 2002-08-19 11:51 PM

It does, Mike
and I do
thank you

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