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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Never does the water come to the land within a drought. And now my mind is caving is from, the building of my doubts. I am nothing. I am nothing, and I never will or can be. I rather live in self-pity, then in lies you'd have filled inside of me. You can get inside my skin, then start will me, and I'll let you win. I am nothing. ~*~ Never again will I show my weakness. Never again to anyone, Never again to you. ~*~ Rarely does the water come to the land within a drought. My mind once caved in from, the pressure of my doubts. I'm still nothing. I'm am nothing, more than what I choose to be. I'm glad I live in my self-pity then being happy with lies you'd have told me. You will never get in my skin, start with me now, I'll try to win. I'm still nothing. ~*~ now my eyes are bleeding. now my eyes are seeing. *~* now you heart is bleeding now my heart is feeling. now my heart's still beating. ~*~ If I never again reveal my weakness ...Never again to anyone never again to you... I can defeat any force... ...I can be unstoppable Even if i amount to nothing ... i can still be me "Anyday now... I will be heard." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I do see strength beyond the self pity here...sometimes? a bit of anger is all that's needed--much to ponder here, in its complicated simplicity! |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
I'm trying to find it.. i think. I'm a little dazed at the moment... very. but thanks for your reply, and you time.  -Sara "Anyday now... I will be heard." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Whoa ... I see *hope* in this! Is this Sara? Really?  Awesome! |
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dj29 Junior Member
since 2002-08-19
Posts 13Florida |
Wonderfull work I loved the poem...and i felt alot from it.........Stay happy Dj29 "I still believe, in spite of everything, that people are truly good at heart" ~Anne Frank, Diary entry from 15 July 1944. |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Mike~ yes ... this is me-but buried in the debris... I feel like I've been hit with a hurricane... DJ~ new here? I've read your work, quite impressive. Thanks to the both of you. -raVen- (SARA) "Anyday now... I will be heard." |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
you wallow in strength as well as pity. i like that. it's an admirable thing. you're writing improves each time i read a new post by you. and i think a little bit of the depression disappears with each post as well... this was good. sad, but determined. it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown |
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