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of handkerchiefs...and men I've had (repost from open..twenty?)
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of handkerchiefs...and men I've had (repost from open..twenty?) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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wind... a blue and silver swirl wind to change in pounce of twirl a skirt of crying reckless now within a spin of universe... Stars electric sparking mad a blue and silver world gone bad-- a float of love's incompetence of handkerchiefs and men I've had... A ritual remains the same make it sacred the profrane. Let it whip around again in lark of flame of perverse grin... Let horizon mark the point. Perspective-- be two eyes in joint. To gaze the path and plot my hedge... handkerchief's embroidered edge, a joy of stitch in hoop of you. Joyous stitch in joyous loop... the rounds and sounds. the ways of you... and all that I have never had... |
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desolation angel Junior Member
since 2002-08-11
Posts 20east coast |
this sounded really...witchy and...i can't describe it, but i like. a lot. don't undress my love |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Really witchy...Hmmm You KNOW I'll agree with that. ~wranx The shortest distance between two points... |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Nice work serenity...enjoyed very much. Hugs DeaDiAmore |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
superb flow, Serenity... awesome! ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
yes, echo Tiersdin until that part at the end the suddenly sad part the twist. you do this TOO well Brian I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Curse me. Light me 13 red candles and in that color write my Tina's name on fresh white bread. Toss it in the flow and watch, watch me eat the passion that I beg. "Happy people have no history" - French Proverb |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Curse me. (Light me?) 13 red candles and in that color write my Tina's name on fresh white bread. Toss it? in the flow and watch, "watch me eat the passion that I beg..." "Happy people have no history" *this is what they say* "Tres bon..." within slim cigarettes. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
lucky men. loved this when first read... and? now that you're moderator...does this mean we can all lift our skirts a bit if YOU say it's ok??? *bat bat* and my ever devious grin... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Skirts? I've been wearing a dress this whole --- er, I mean!!!  If that's "witchy" writing, sign me up! MikeyStrangeGuy P.S. I remember this poem! |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
oh yeah it is a bit witchy inst it cool  If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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