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shadowchild458
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0 posted 2002-08-12 09:48 PM


ok sara, I said I wouldn't post anything now but I have to type so here I go...it feels so good to be back again! if any of you noticed or cared I was gone for fifteen days and I couldn't write here (obviously) so I'm going to be seen here a lot in the next few days...here I go...

the world is a circle
I've just figured that out
they have birds
on the other side of the world
I love it there
in the sun and the rain
but still in the end
I always end up back here
for like a vacum it pulls me
until finally i am back
where I started
and sometimes that is a good thing
and sometimes it is bad
and though I may change
I may grow
may be different
but I'm still the same
little girl who likes to sit
and sulk in the dust
and wonder why I was ever born
blood still runs through my veins
and I still feel like pursing my skin
every once in a while
and I still get the urge to jump
off a bridge
but now I know finally
in this world
I'm not the only one

life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait

AKJ

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PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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since 2002-07-02
Posts 439
I am everywhere
1 posted 2002-08-12 09:57 PM


"and I still get the urge to jump
off a bridge"


The Golden Gate Bridge?  (j/j... i hope you never do anything like that.)

Anyway, I'm very glad your back, and very glad i can read your poetry once again.

Great work... i think this applies to me.

-Sara

"Your suffering will free you."
-Otep

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2 posted 2002-08-14 11:23 AM


Listen I used to feel that way, but if your strong you break the circle. Its a true write.

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

MidnightSon
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since 2002-05-15
Posts 312
between the gutter & the stars
3 posted 2002-08-16 05:49 AM


even with thoughts like these, it's always good to know your not alone in having them.
you can't spin in circles forever.
eventually you gotta stop.
and throw up.

it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown

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