»
Archives
»
Dark Poetry #3
»
Barely Memories
| Dark Poetry #3 |
|
Barely Memories |
|
|
PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
An excruciating pain creeps over me. Barely conscious, I let it all dilute me slowly. A tiny cry for help, no one comes to save me. Barely able to tell if I even made a sound. I am so incredibly weak, that I can't open my eyes. Barely wanting to know what I'd see if I could. ~ I am ruined ~ I remember everything, every word, every feeling, every expression, every pealing... The way your heart beat sounded. That's how close we were, How silent it was. I remember it being dark outside, rain tapping the window. You were my light, that night. ~ I am Tarnished ~ A pounding ache fills my head. Barely able to tell if I'm alive or not. A shovel digs deep down inside me. Barely breathing I bare it... ~as if the damage you'd done wasn't good enough... I have to suffer from memories also~ "Your suffering will free you." -Otep [This message has been edited by PoeticGoddessOfDepression (08-12-2002 02:18 PM).] |
||
| © Copyright 2002 Sara Nicole - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wonderfully powerful images here Write on Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
||
|
Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
very well done..... ~~ Connie ~~ |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
