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PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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I am everywhere

0 posted 2002-08-11 09:42 PM



(Sorry, I've posted so much... I've been writing a lot, lately, though ... thought I'd post some.)

Merciless beating of common sense

Everyday - tying my hardest to mend.

Never a sign of relief or belief.

Everyday - screams pour from inside.

Horrid pictures of morbid engagements.

Everyday - struggling to pick up my pieces.

I shout at the creator...

Why'd you create such a hideous beast?

I'm without a heart, and ugly inside...

Inside's what counts.

And that's the only part I can't hide.


"Your suffering will free you."
-Otep

[This message has been edited by PoeticGoddessOfDepression (08-11-2002 09:51 PM).]

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wranx
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1 posted 2002-08-11 10:03 PM


This is a good write Sara.
Don't be too sorry about posting so much.
At least you are writing something to post.

Unlike
~wranx

The shortest distance between two points...
is sometimes, intolerable.      

Bukowski

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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2 posted 2002-08-11 10:07 PM




thanks

"Your suffering will free you."
-Otep

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3 posted 2002-08-14 11:51 AM


hey post as much as you want thats what the forums is here for. Besides you have to keep me amused cos I like figuring (or tryin to)
out what they mean. I so love your style.

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

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