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War is a Forest
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War is a Forest |
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Dustin462 Junior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 23Selah, WA |
The pine trees try to keep their roots planted While a solider tries to go home to his family Trees and flowers being cut to the ground While Soldiers falling to the floor by a fierce bullet wound Fires spreading throughout the forest As gunshots go off at war Creatures are running Our own kind is running We must prevent all of this A war is a forest tying to survive Dustin [This message has been edited by Dustin462 (08-10-2002 03:22 PM).] |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Wonderful poem... very true, actually. But, in the line : "Creatures our running" should our be are? It just made more sense to me. If not, it'smy fault. Hope to see more of you. _Sara |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Very nice....enjoyed much. DeaDiAmore |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Good asociation with war and nature. it is both that and us which suffer  If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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