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Jessica
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0 posted 2002-08-06 11:27 PM


Dreams fill my eyes
As I pray each night
For magical enchantment
And my lovers sight

Hope overcomes my world
Counting countless blessings
That have ceased to be
Dilliusion, my wounds dressing

Fingertips burn with touch
As emptiness drowns fears
Again my river flows freely
With remberance of past years

Echoes of your voice ring out
Tunes of promises broken
Somehow my heart forgives
Still buried in pillow, tear soaken

Blood runs no more for you
Eyes burn not again
But still I love you always
As a new hurt begins

The hurt that screams no more
Shall I wait in sorrow and pain
No more asking questions
Letting my pleas remain

My moon will rise tonight
And my sun will set this evening
Always my heart will love yours
As it did in the beginning

~*~  This is the product of writer's block for about 4 months now.  Please critique and don't go easy on me, lol.  I haven't been here in a little while cause my life is going to hell in a hand basket again and I am trying to figure it out so that give me more of an excuse to write, right? Sorry if my replies are limited; I am doing my best. Definately reading though.  


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ThUnDeRkYsS
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1 posted 2002-08-06 11:31 PM


Beautiful as usual, my dear.     {{{{{HUGZ}}}}}} in your troubled times

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



bsquirrel
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2 posted 2002-08-07 12:14 PM


Y'know, I was *wondering* where you'd gone. Life is full of two things: calm, and crisis. You're in the crisis part right now, I guess. But you'll get through it, back to the calm (in order to gear up for another crisis, another calm, another crisis, another calm, etc.)

I like how you use "soaken."

Mike

"I fall into your arms."

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