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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Though there's burning inside me, you cannot deride me. You can try to take everything But you cannot get away... with it. Though the pain is enormous, you cannot perform this... You can try to heal everything but you cannot take away... the pain. With itching and scratching, I've undone the latching!!! You can try to tie me up again but you cannot catch me... good day. Now that i have broken though the restraints, I can never ever be the same. I can try to stay away, but i can never take away the pain... (i don't know... this isn't that good. Anyway, tell me what you think, freely, truthfully... Thanks, Sara (raven) You said you knew me enough to love me. So if you loved me... why didn't you know this would hurt me? [This message has been edited by PoeticGoddessOfDepression (08-06-2002 05:45 PM).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Sara/Raven/PoeticGoddess/Depressed Person, It's goooooood.  Didja mean perform instead of proform? Mike "I fall into your arms." |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Thanks... Why, yes I did. Thanks for pointing it out... i probably wouldn't have caught it. Thanks again. |
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