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Jason
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0 posted 2002-08-06 02:47 PM



in the night's darkest hour
in stillness, in silence I stand
unleashing my sorcerous power
your will is mine to command

I call you forth, my slave
arise from your dark abyss
for I, your Master, craves
the taste of your blood upon my lips

kneel down here before me
look up into my ice-blue eyes
the cold you see, with clarity
you will feel along your spine

your sleeping form I leave at peace
'tis within your dreams I am found
hunting you without surcease
you are the fox, I am the hound

Jason Daniels
(originally published under my pseudonym Jason Darkthorne,in 1999, as an answer to a challenge.)

Practiced in the Art of Perception

© Copyright 2002 Jason Daniels - All Rights Reserved
bsquirrel
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1 posted 2002-08-06 03:09 PM


I thought it looked familiar. It's aged well.

Said if I only could ...
-KB

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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2 posted 2002-08-06 04:43 PM


hmm...
Very dark...and different.
I can't say I've read many poems like this,
but I hope to.

-Sara

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3 posted 2002-08-14 01:45 AM


"I call you forth, my slave
arise from your dark abyss
for I, your Master, craves
the taste of your blood upon my lips"


This one always did just make me shiver.   I remember hearing this one out loud once our twice. Its wonderful both ways.   Here is a trip to the top for you.



I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

[This message has been edited by Temptress (08-14-2002 01:52 AM).]

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4 posted 2002-08-14 10:51 AM


I liked this so much its interesting in a dark way

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

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