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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486
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HeartBreak And the darkness falls, bringing with it the shadows of the night where terror sneaks upon the heart to lay claim with clammy hands Gripping one within its hold, only to be released by the breaking of the dawn The sun begins to rise as yet another heart, broken by cruelty is laid to rest |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
a line from jewel rang in my head... "hearts are broken everyday" your poem could be put on the grave marker... enjoyed it it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Ouch! Unflinchingly lost to love. I enjoyed your words. Said if I only could ... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I always marvel at the way that you can express yourself. Loved this one as well. ~wranx The shortest distance between two points... |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
I loved the way you used your words so well in this. It showed how when you lose love you feel dead... and sometimes you are, inside. Thanks. ~Jess |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Thanks for reading and the kind replies! DeaDiAmore |
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