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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon 
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Oh that simple melancholy be my only malady suffering moments of depression guilty of valiumed expression prescription bottled life a tranquilized wife. Instead an agony of breath instead of dread, a myriad upon itself, and then again does multiply without end a disease that finite cannot die in this does my futility lie. WhiteRose 08/02 |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I'm surprised at how few poems about clinical depression end up in Dark.  Hope yr feelin' okay.Said if I only could ... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
White Rose, I've noticed you posting a lot of good work here in dark. Hope all's well, despite the resultant good poetry. ~wranx The shortest distance between two points... |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Poetry is my therapy. I'm okay. |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
I agree with squirrel dude... I was diagnosed with a ton of stuff but it dosen't mean I am crazy, then again it may... lol I have been reading all of your work and have you ever considered trying to put a few of your poems together to create one long one? Or perhaps creating like a, urmm, I don't know what you would call it but the word that comes to mind is cluster, maybe series... help me on this squrriel... Great write though... Totally felt here. ~Jess [This message has been edited by Jessica (08-06-2002 11:47 PM).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Ah, but I think it depends on how WhiteRose writes. If she sits down, writes a fragment, then immediately writes another, then yes, they can probably be strung together. But if it's hours between fragments, and none of them join neatly, they can stay separate. But yes, I like the idea of a sort of collage of fragments into something greater than its parts. Though the parts are nice, too. Keep writin'! "I fall into your arms." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
(wow, talk about wavering on my part -- I d'nno, I like 'em short, AND I like 'em long)Something to try, anyway. "I fall into your arms." |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
All of these poems were written about different experiences, different emotions, at different times. To string them together would make them false to me. I write them when I feel them, and then move on. If I were to stay within the realm of the feelings shared in each poem I would most definately come away completely insane. Love Seduces Joy From The Heart |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Fair enough. Glad you're postin' here."I fall into your arms." |
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