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Night Shadow
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0 posted 2002-08-04 06:54 PM



  Im here Cause of you, in this life belonging to you. How can i smile without looking in your eyes, how can sleep without getting the warm from your heart.
  Every body says i love you, but you must be sure that mine is different not just cause i said that, but im here for you, and CAUSE Of YOU.
  Alot loves cause they alive, but i live cause i love you, so be sure that our hearts became one part, and nowadays i live by your heart ohh sorry by our heart, cause my heart had changed to your heart from the 1st moment i saw you.

Night Shadow.  

© Copyright 2002 Night Shadow - All Rights Reserved
bsquirrel
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1 posted 2002-08-06 01:23 PM


Welcome, Night Shadow. I'm retrieving this love letter from the dustbin and pushing it back to the top.

Said if I only could ...
-KB

Night Shadow
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2 posted 2002-08-06 04:38 PM


Dear bsquirrel, be sure that im gonna be glade for any opinion or new idea i get from other people, anyhow ur opinion is so important for me and i hope that im really gonna reach that top. thanx and hope to keep intouch.

Night Shadow

bsquirrel
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3 posted 2002-08-06 05:40 PM


Thank you, Night Shadow. I'm touched that my opinion means so much to you.

"I fall into your arms."

Chameleon
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4 posted 2002-08-07 01:29 AM


I have a great appreciation for this.
The aesthetic quality...
The attitude

secretlife
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5 posted 2002-08-12 01:30 AM


Hey Night Shadow what a really sensitive words.. u can write better than me and explain more ur feelings...but u know I feel that I know you I dont know why..any way it seem that u r in love.. mmmmmmmmmm I really feel u ,,,soooo keep going waiting to read more from u,,
                ,,,Big huges,,,

Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)
  

Purity
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6 posted 2002-08-12 02:40 AM


Although I totally understand of what you write... I have been here so oft, that I am still no better but to say this..."How can I smile without looking in your eyes"
It seems this h*ll called heart bumps us up next to the smiles being only of thoughts of looking into those eyes... even when time has made the memory of the depth of beauty seen in them so hard to vividly imagine...
We still dominere in hope.
A most heartfelt write.

Moon Dust
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7 posted 2002-08-14 11:38 AM


up agian cos its too nice too sit at the bottom.

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

Night Shadow
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Posts 41

8 posted 2002-08-19 01:18 PM


Thanx Every Body,

Sweet Secret life, i dont think that i can write best than u, cuz i really still beginner , hahahaaa i think that i know u also. and u r right cuz im really in love. anyhow thanx alot and see u soon.

Dear Chameleon, thanx very much for ur opinion and hope to keep intouch.


Dear Purity, I think that u can know exactly what i feel, i think that u were at the same situation one day. thanx alot and hope u the best.


Moon Dust, Dear friend,who always open his both hands for help. thanx alot my friend.

Night Shadow

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