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New feelings.....but I am scare.....
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New feelings.....but I am scare..... |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
When I think about you... I get scare.. Scare from these new feelings... These feelings that I never think to feel it again... The fear of losing you drive me crazy... Fearing from these new feelings.... New strange feelings... I always asks the moon in the dark night... Is these feelings are real.. Is thses feelings are what I am scare from.. Thinking about you all the day... And all the time.. Every Minutes and seconds.... But.....I stopped when my fearing comes again... You might ask your self whats the fear of these new feelings... I am gana answer the soul... Fearing from new love in my life... Fearing I might lose you man... Or I might been in hurt... Or he might never think to love me... Just keeping the fear in my heart... When I start imagining you... Imagining your soft smile...or your face... Or touching your angle heart.... All I can do is....keeping and saving our friendship like that forever.. Just to keep hearing your voice honey... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Your poem is easily understood, by heart and mind, even though English appears to be a second language (or third?) Welcome to PiP and the "Dark forum" ~wranx The shortest distance between two points... |
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HeartBeats Junior Member
since 2002-08-03
Posts 16TX |
I agree completely! You obviously have a desire to express yourself and worthy things to say, so I hope any negative reactions to your English skills don't stop you from continuing to learn the langauge and posting your works. I, for one, hope to see many more= ) [This message has been edited by HeartBeats (08-03-2002 01:53 PM).] |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Kwel I like it, you so got the feeling out. Look forward 2 seeing more  If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Yes dear wranx my english is not very well u can say its my second language,,, but I like very much to write the poems in english..So Iam really trying my best to improve my english..any way thanx for ur opinion dear friend,,Just as always tell me ur opinion.. Thanx alot.. Thanx HeartBeats for ur opinion and dont worry I will keep writting more and more untile my english become much better just I need your support... Thanx alot my dear.. And you Moon Dust,, thanx alot too Iam happy that you like it..and sure I will let you see more... thanx dear.. Secretlife,, |
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Night Shadow Junior Member
since 2002-08-04
Posts 41 |
Great truly words lead me to feel that this secret life, hide a very sensitive person behind her secret mask. I cant correct your mistakes cause im not the right person for that, i just can tell you go on, and hope you the best. Night Shadow. |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Thanx Night Shadow for ur very soft words Iam happy that u like it which support me to write more and more,, about the secrets in my life ,,,Thanx that u tell me ur opinion about hidding and stuff like that,,,all I can say that thanx very much and its ok if u correct my mistakes even if u r not the right person...just tell me ur opinion ,,, Thanx alot.. Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
enjoyed your open mind here!! Welcome to the dark side!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Welcome, secretlife. I enjoyed your soft little lullaby here. Mike Said if I only could ... |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Thanx dear devina for ur support.. thanx alot,, And u bsquirrel,, thanx for ur soft words Iam happy that u enjoyed my poems.. Hugs Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) |
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