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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon 
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Darkness is my home shadows are my bed loneliness surrounds me I walk as one whose dead. I thought I would survive but how...I'm not alive. Who lives from the grave? This is all you gave. Who breathes while underground? Who hears without a sound? All stopped when you left all is muted..I am deaf. You took what life I had I'm now just a shell I gave you my heaven you left me to this hell. WhiteRose |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
hiy dear.... I like what you have written..but its a direct words and sad with hopless...I think its too much sadness and hopless,,,but never mind its good I like the way you wrote it,,,its strong words,,,be happy dear and smile to the life,,,like I am trying to do... good luck,, secretlife.......R |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Sad and despairing, but almost a lullaby at that. Oh, and it's who's, not whose.  Said if I only could ... |
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