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WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-08-01 04:24 PM



You've now seen the dark that's stricken me
the beast that steals my right to be
the demon that lives within my head
my state of never-ending dread
this haunting that lives within my space
this specter that I cannot erase
so free yourself from who I am
get away from here while you still can
he's neither controlled nor caged you see
so please take flight, just turn and flee.

WhiteRose

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Purity
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since 2001-11-20
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Once Upon, USA
1 posted 2002-08-01 09:41 PM


I thoroughly liked the elevation of demon living inside your head turned haunting that lives within your space.
Flowed nicely, and nicely done

bsquirrel
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2 posted 2002-08-01 11:33 PM


If this is what the demon's doing to you WR, congratulate her for having such great taste in poetry.

Mikey

Said if I only could ...
-KB

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