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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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I can see silence. She stares at me without eyes. I can smell silence. Apples cooking underwater. I can taste silence. Whispered stones among shallows. I can touch silence. Pressing plastic keys of type. I can hear silence. She said burn ... together. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH... (just to break the silence) now? LIVEN UP mikey!!! sheesh...  nice mentals here... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
 Thanks, Devina. I appreciate th' smile you just gave me.Said if I only could ... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Squirrel dude, This is a wondrous piece. But, You're takin' that silence thing a little far. More o' the raucus rodent please. BTW, When I hit the reply button, in just a moment, I'll be kicked to the "old" server. I've only been able to access the "new" late this AM, then not at all till just now. We'll see, Hopin' this ain't a goodbye ~wranx The shortest distance between two points... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Yes, this was a little muted of me, wranx. I was not in happy spirits while writing it. Feeling better now.And the server, since changing, still kicks people off now and again. It has to do with ISPs. Ron knows more about it than I do. Feel free to drop him a message in Bug Swatter, and he can give you a much more technical, and correct, reply. Said if I only could ... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Not lookin' for techical, t'would be like splainin' Justice to a lawyer. just wouldn't get it! Looks like arytings ai'eet now, tho'. ~wranx The shortest distance between two points... |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
Hmm, well this is more like it, in a response to yr own challenge... But Mr. Mope has reared his dreary li'l head again. *kiss* Be happy. Fr me? Fr you? Fr cool music and cool memories and cool futures. And fr the fact that I will be regaling you with rants about Billy Idol performing live in the Mac Hall as soon as I get home on Wednesday. Still wish you could go with me to that... Love y' muchly. Sad, gone poetry and all. written in blood before everything went black JCV [This message has been edited by Anvrill (07-29-2002 07:32 PM).] |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
loved the metaphor in the open one but this... yes .....this is the taste of silence as only you can conjure sorry it was baggaged with badness BS I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
oh...at the risk of wallowing in YOUR misery? gotta smile... grins to all others who read. Y'GOTTA read this one, with Bessie Smith on the headphones. and? oh yeah, billie holiday-- "good-mornin' heart-ache" and let's not forget etta james-- *snaps* , squirrel!  |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Glad you all enjoyed. And thanks for the chuckle, sen. I'm a jazz guy now?! Mikey Said if I only could ... |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Mikey, I like it. *grins* A very piercing, dark piece. Sorry I don't have more then that - I usually don't post short ones like this. Hopefully more next time.  Sincerely, Titus "They say that a hero can save us. I'm not gonna stand here and wait..." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks, PiL.Said if I only could ... |
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